Domestic Violence Persuasive

Begin with an interesting quotation related to your opinion about Domestic Violence (You will need a transition here)
– End the Intro paragraph with your thesis statement:
Even though , it’s not right because women should be honored and women should be treated with respect .

Body Paragraph or Section #1
Topic of the body thesis:
– Find evidence – like facts, examples, quotations, or statistics that back it up or support the topic sentence of this paragraph. – Explain how your evidence supports the topic sentence
Another example that shows that is…
– Find more evidence – facts, examples, quotations, or statistics that back it up or support the topic sentence of this paragraph. – Explain how this second piece of evidence supports the topic sentence. Body Paragraph or Section #2

Even though , it’s not right because women should be honored. – Find evidence – like facts, examples, quotations, or statistics that back it up or support the topic sentence of this paragraph. – Explain how your evidence supports the topic sentence

Another example that shows that women should be honored is… – Find more evidence – facts, examples, quotations, or statistics that back it up or support the topic sentence of this paragraph. – Explain how this second piece of evidence supports the topic sentence. Body Paragraph or Section #3

The most important reason it’s not right is because women should be treated with respect . – Find evidence – like facts, examples, quotations, or statistics that back it up or support the topic sentence of this paragraph. – Explain how your evidence supports the topic sentence

Another example that shows that women should be treated with respect is… – Find more evidence – facts, examples, quotations, or statistics that back it up or support the topic sentence of this paragraph. – Explain how this second piece of evidence supports the topic sentence. Conclusion

So it is clear that although , it’s not right for two main reasons. First, women should be honored. But most importantly, women should be treated with respect . – Now you will return to your opening attention-getter from the introduction – Then end your essay with a powerful So What? statement.